Wednesday, February 10, 2010

my version of little days

with a little bit of leg with that dress.

Plus I'm drafty, wind in the lungs and my hands are weighty
by my sides, grasping my eye with those latina lips
1. basket
2. prosciutto
3. salami
4. bread
5. Humboldt fog goat cheese
6. wooden cutting board
7. soft linen
8. cotton picnic sheet; patterned
9. her and that sundress
10. wine and weed

I imagine that things won't go according to plan, it'll be windy, seeing the clouds
move against the background. G told me at least I'll get to see you. I understand that.
Sleeping against the grass, trying to keep the sweat out of my eyes.

Hopefully I'll feel complete before the


  1. I really enjoyed reading this one! Simple and smart.

  2. i like your adaptation! especially the first line about the leg

    i loved the quote from the book
    "A list is the bones of plot the way desire is the bones of character"
    maybe its just because i love making lists and checking them off? who knows...


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