Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Mega Story-Lauren, Liset, Laura, and Sheri

She flew around the cold pole, tethering herself, while fists beat the yellow out. Red around the eyes, sweltering heat the saline lava streams down past your lips. I left class early and walked around campus as my feet, heavier than the earth, dragged my body forward. The only thing worse than being cheated on is wet socks.

1 comment:

  1. There is a great use of color throughout this piece, with the yellow ball and the red eyes. Even though it's short, it is extremely effective and it definitely conveys a sense of youth and innocence. You can tell that it was written about young children.


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