The syntax of the piece is interesting; oftentimes two separate thoughts will combine without a paragraph breaks. Like an actual day. The narrative also will change from first person to third. Making the story a powerful representation of the chaotic thoughts thorough-out a day. There are also many different themes that converge throughout the story, such as, (Squirrels, V, A, T, bugs, cats with long tails.)
In the section a woman is confronted with a robber that is stealing her bed. It begins with “SOUND” the reader knows instantly that something is about to happen. Through this use of action the author sucks the reader in.
The author will also use punctuation in an interesting way. P. 54 “….the bottom drawer full of journals. Silence…” The story is well crafted, unique and is a fine depiction of the writer’s voice.