tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post9051593886095295527..comments2010-05-02T08:40:47.108-07:00Comments on CW 302: Little Book of DaysRose Haynes Touhyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05367128288954818603noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-15321538046903366372010-02-16T14:19:45.626-08:002010-02-16T14:19:45.626-08:00"A professor squaks with the effortless scree..."A professor squaks with the effortless screech of a parrot" I love this! Yes, this response is full of quality, without the need for quantity- seeing as every line has more than one layer of description, metaphor & simile. This is great work.Andi Vanettahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11246427200829969713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-21171512615318607022010-02-11T17:00:08.609-08:002010-02-11T17:00:08.609-08:00I, too, enjoyed reading your rendition more so tha...I, too, enjoyed reading your rendition more so than the actual piece. Beautifully written.kelsey_peahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12249186297385170157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-87130712173776524892010-02-10T23:03:14.754-08:002010-02-10T23:03:14.754-08:00I was really able to picture your "walking&qu...I was really able to picture your "walking" piece. It's easy to follow and I enjoyed reading it.Sherihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927462371765752459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-10751252224962688822010-02-10T21:42:21.130-08:002010-02-10T21:42:21.130-08:00I feel like your "in class" piece really...I feel like your "in class" piece really captures the boredom that can be felt from sitting through a irksome class. I can relate a lot to the first line, a professor's voice and method of teaching can play a crucial role in what you walk away from the class with, whether it be the feeling that you're actually getting something out of your education, or just a page filled with random doodlesJake Wyleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03051579479156654406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-89973971914023843442010-02-10T19:58:09.566-08:002010-02-10T19:58:09.566-08:00I also enjoyed your rendition. It was brief, but f...I also enjoyed your rendition. It was brief, but full. It was a pleasant change from that of "Little Book of Days".Lauren Rossihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10866241407530886317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-74315140585858290302010-02-10T19:35:45.844-08:002010-02-10T19:35:45.844-08:00Thank you for your commentary! I always love feedb...Thank you for your commentary! I always love feedback.<br /><br />-AlexAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02191115132077869242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-76716506794313414552010-02-10T19:13:02.166-08:002010-02-10T19:13:02.166-08:00Alex
I really enjoyed your mimic of Little Book of...Alex<br />I really enjoyed your mimic of Little Book of Days. It conveys the immediate stylistic elements she was going for. However, I found your rendition much more inspiring. You have a nice way of displaying the mundane with grand detail. "My face begins to enlighten and I count all the bones in my face". This is a good use of gesture, as we read in Prose. <br /><br />Jason YellandMaynard11https://www.blogger.com/profile/16732022239470395133noreply@blogger.com