tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post8614790756853973238..comments2010-05-02T08:40:47.108-07:00Comments on CW 302: Creative Response to Sonnets by Ted BerriganRose Haynes Touhyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05367128288954818603noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-66794873122440348912010-04-07T15:04:13.323-07:002010-04-07T15:04:13.323-07:00Your response is very clear, and easy to follow. I...Your response is very clear, and easy to follow. It has a very dark and mysterious tone to it. "doomed till 3, he is sleeping with one eye open" gives us an image of a person suffering some sort of mental illness. I really liked it! :)Sherihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927462371765752459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-32860263060830993772010-04-07T13:57:34.283-07:002010-04-07T13:57:34.283-07:00"When Is The Impossible Just Improbable."..."When Is The Impossible Just Improbable." The distinction is hard to seperate, yet the tone of your piece helps us realize the difference, some what. Having the narrator be only 17 is a nice touch. We see his ideas and thoughts to be incomplete, much like how the piece is structured. Someone so young could not have much life experience, yet we understand and encourage the moments of his awareness, not fully, but respectfully.<br /><br />Jason YellandMaynard11https://www.blogger.com/profile/16732022239470395133noreply@blogger.com