tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post8172041583882466224..comments2010-05-02T08:40:47.108-07:00Comments on CW 302: Lorum IbsumRose Haynes Touhyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05367128288954818603noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-71369010545565348382010-02-24T17:25:14.056-08:002010-02-24T17:25:14.056-08:00Wondering what your translation would be for this....Wondering what your translation would be for this. But very good at capturing the art of Gertrude Stein. Could see some use of repetition here.olivia choihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03849014396597645497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-74475878771345042642010-02-24T16:53:06.086-08:002010-02-24T16:53:06.086-08:00I'm not really sure here. Your attempt is appl...I'm not really sure here. Your attempt is applauded, yet the depth of your piece escapes me. The connection from this to G.S. is felt in the random nature of your rendition. Therefore, the magic that G.S. has acheive with utter randomness is msatched with your Lorum Ipsum rendition.Maynard11https://www.blogger.com/profile/16732022239470395133noreply@blogger.com