tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post7767215855639472893..comments2010-05-02T08:40:47.108-07:00Comments on CW 302: The Dream Songs - AgainRose Haynes Touhyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05367128288954818603noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-41722045232808295942010-03-03T22:54:49.713-08:002010-03-03T22:54:49.713-08:00I liked the use of repetition as it really capture...I liked the use of repetition as it really captured the spirit of Berrymans poems.NickHeilmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06598470684108902620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-36815649455786046442010-03-03T16:01:39.205-08:002010-03-03T16:01:39.205-08:00I like where you applied the breaks, I feel like i...I like where you applied the breaks, I feel like it helps to structure the piece even though it disconnects it slightly. Interesting use of repetitionKatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12132283295353768959noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-69776483905737152412010-03-03T14:50:03.444-08:002010-03-03T14:50:03.444-08:00I enjoyed your piece, I though it captured the spi...I enjoyed your piece, I though it captured the spirit of Berryman's The Dream Songs very well. I espcially liked the lines "Blood running down an abandoned river glides upon a slick rock. Cracking a fresh wound to the exposed sun." It felt it was a good use of imagery.Alfonsohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13022278560541263538noreply@blogger.com