tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post5106437888912504426..comments2010-05-02T08:40:47.108-07:00Comments on CW 302: Little Book of DaysRose Haynes Touhyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05367128288954818603noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-37401960633351224102010-02-11T09:04:26.133-08:002010-02-11T09:04:26.133-08:00Could imagine everything you said. Strong imagery ...Could imagine everything you said. Strong imagery used. See that you captured the moment very much like the fashion of the book. Also liked the "overwhelmed by under-stimulation" part.olivia choihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03849014396597645497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-58110030584129885212010-02-11T01:42:49.937-08:002010-02-11T01:42:49.937-08:00I feel like you did a very good job in recreating ...I feel like you did a very good job in recreating the feel of the book. The concert piece was true to life and very enjoyable. I know the feeling of being overwhelmed in such a situation and even feeling a bit lost. The second part of the piece offers a great moment of antithesis, with the line "overwhelmed by under-stimulation". Nice use of literary devices :)Stephanie Dottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18444303509626273261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-59156983080946598922010-02-11T00:52:18.075-08:002010-02-11T00:52:18.075-08:00this is great, you really captured the feeling of ...this is great, you really captured the feeling of the book, in a funny way. The end of the first entry, I really like the Black. White. Black. Black. Black.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6299292801138212390.post-16083759315214669102010-02-10T20:31:06.516-08:002010-02-10T20:31:06.516-08:00I wish someone would give me a ticket to the oppor...I wish someone would give me a ticket to the opportunity America is talking about. I feel like I know people that are constantly overwhelmed by under-stimulation. That's a good way of putting it.BRent Hutchinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11395567790716124685noreply@blogger.com